I wrote a poem. I'm taking suggestions.
If you could leap a mountain,
And dance upon the sea,
Fly across the starry sky
And catch the moon for me
That's all I have.
I wrote an ending that I hate, so I'm not going to post it. It is not complete though and needs some love. Let me know what direction it should take.
were you to bring me such a gift
ReplyDeletethe thing i would require
would not be all the pretty things---
your heart is my desire.
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What think ye? Do you like the direction, is it awkward? Is it unclear? Repeatitve?
Or maybe. . .
ReplyDeleteI want not such resplendent gifts,
The one thing I require
Would not be all the pretty things
Your heart my soul desire.